I concur with JohnM, except it looks like you may have one of the lower end bikes which still comes with a freewheel. 7 speed rear? Dead giveaway on a new bike.
I believe that road shocks are by far more important than pedaling force, but that's just my opinion.
I had the same idea but the older bikes I favor typically come with a 3/8"/9.5mm solid axle. Your Shimano freewheel has 22mm splines but not all do. Some fw's don't even go on with splines and the bore which the outside of the bearing would go on is not very evenly finished, just roughly broached out.
I think running a bit of preload on the bearings as well as avoiding big bumps goes a long way toward axle longevity.
BTW you can buy solid 10mm axles if you want more strength.