I Designed Raise Awareness Cycling Shirt

[moshelog]

what do you guys think ?

more info here => http://myuniquetees.com/vip/savecyclist


--moshe

 

[Susimi]

I quite like them.

The message is strong but you could appeal more to the masses by replacing "****ing" with "damn", or something similar. That would probably ensure younger people would wear them with their parents acceptance.

 

[moshelog]

thanks for the comment, thing is i had so many good comments/orders that i decided to
leave it as it is.

 

[Mengtian]

I think as far as sales you will sell what sells bets. As far as the intent of the message.............I think it will shed a negative view about cyclists in many peoples eyes. Cyclists are already thought of as being rude and/or snobby. The shirts might reinforce that beleif in people.

I agree with Susimi, if your intent is to deliver a positive message...change the wording. If your intent is you bottom line...do as you please. I would not wear one, nor would I walk or cycle with someone wearing one.
YMMV

 

[ZXD22]

Lol straight to the point I like it. Maybe add a funny picture of a driver opebig their eyes huge through the front windshield of the car!

 

[E.Mil77]

I like that the shirt comes in different colors and the message does come across very strong. This will really get people's attention.

 

[Keyan]

I like the intention but not the F word. You can get your idea across without being too blunt or harsh about it. Orders? there are too many options where you could buy anything customized to your liking.

 

[MNyte]

Quite nice - raise the awareness of the danger of cycling. People on the street are very ignorant, and blind, who can not even notice bicyclist.

 

[Lizel]

Cool, but I would replace the word "****ing" with a more adequate word, like @Susimi said "damn" would be better.

 

[cabrannon529]

I love your shirt design! The point gets across very well, thanks to the language! I would wear it! Good job, OP. I'm looking forward to seeing more T-Shirt designs from you.

 

[coffee_minion]

Cool shirt! I like the color choices too. Hopefully, there will be a white one as well.

 

[Bark]

Haha, that's an awesome shirt. I have a pretty crude sense of humor, so I don't mind the f-bomb in there.