Ah well, that may be in the eye of the beholder, may it not? Whether or not a certain piece of prose appears clear to someone certainly does depend on that person's grasp of the language in question, doesn't it?
See, there you go again, "drawing conclusions". Although it is certainly my pleasure to engage in an argument with a literate person, didn't I tell you to lay off of your attempts at the art of drawing inferences from limited data?
Well, let's just say that I have written many hundreds of pages in my professional life, which have been published in books and journals. I'll grant you that I do not typically write about bicycle mechanics, but of all the editors and reviewers judging my writing you are in fact the first one to complain about the clarity, or rather the lack thereof, of my writing. Shall I now proceed to draw some conclusions from that?
O.k., seriously now, I have no desire to engage in pointless argument with you. As you might have guessed, my time is too valuable for that.
I do admit that the style of your initial response to my post did bother me, for reasons that I have made clear, and that maybe my response was unnecessarily harsh. I apologize if that is so. I propose to end this argument at this point, at least from my side, but feel free to add any comments of yours that you feel are necessary.