suggestions with lyrics

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  1. mongoose123

    mongoose123 New Member

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    Anyone a fan of The Veronicas? I bought their album the other day, its what i work out to. They're not too bad. I'm usually not a fan of these little poppy/rocky type of music but i don't know, some of their songs are catchy and upbeat and easy to listen to while i go cycling around the park.

    Anyways thats besides the point. I'm actually trying to win their signed guitar in their next verse competition where i have to re-write their 2nd verse of their song 'hook me up'. Do you guys know it? I am having a little trouble with writing the verse and i was hoping i could get some help or suggestions.

    There's more info in their site and if you haven't heard the song, its here as well http://www.theveronicas.com.au/nextverse.html

    any suggestions are greatly appreciated.
     
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    mongoose123 New Member

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    no one here has any ideas?? doesnt need to be a master piece? Just want snippets of ideas?? please?? hello??
     
  3. Crankyfeet

    Crankyfeet New Member

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    So you want us to hopefully write the verse for you so you can win the guitar?
     
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    mongoose123 New Member

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    yeah in a way...well I just want some hints...soem snippets of lyrics....you could give me bollocks of an answer ...i dun mind as long its something...yopu can enter the comp if you want as well!!
     
  5. Hypnospin

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    i fancy closing pubs
    the chance at finding love
    it's such a social whirl for such a mousy girl

    pour me another pint
    you know i'm out all night
    anything to evade my insanity insanity

    you wanna talk face to face
    you wanna buy me for a song
    but what if it turns out wrong
    it won't turn out wrong
    you know i've waited far too long


     
  6. Crankyfeet

    Crankyfeet New Member

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    Aww man...the comps closed:( ...I was just about to finally get round to doing something for you mongoose. Not being sarcastic here...I wouldn't have clicked on your link if I wasn't serious.
     
  7. Hypnospin

    Hypnospin New Member

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    judging by your avatar, we must say that is positively papal of you...



     
  8. Hypnospin

    Hypnospin New Member

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    the bloke changed his icon on us, please disregard my previous.

     
  9. Crankyfeet

    Crankyfeet New Member

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    Yes, just to clear that up, when Hypnospin made his "papal" comment, my avatar was Hugh Heffner dressed as the Pope.
     
  10. Hypnospin

    Hypnospin New Member

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    fickle avatar changes aside, do my veronica lyrics stand on their own?



     
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